Many components go into creating a
scholarly academic publication. The same
conventions are used in writing this genre to identify a paper as an academic
publication. When comparing “The Influence of Strength Training on
Overhead Throwing Velocity of Elite Water Polo Players,” to the SCIgen
generator, I was surprised to see how much the two articles looked alike at
first glance. Although the articles
follow the same format, and general layout and the actual descriptions in the
papers are different. One might easily
mistake a SCIgen article for an academic article if they don’t logically read
through the SCIgen article and question what its really stating.
Although the SCigen generator’s
article is made up of a lot of nonsense, when you break it down, it does share
a few similarities to “The Influence of Strength Training on Overhead Throwing
Velocity of Elite Water Polo Players” scholarly article. Both articles begin with the title and
underneath are the authors. They then
both have an abstract showing what is to come in the article. Continuing on in the articles, both include
the conventions of an introduction, charts and images, the body of the article,
conclusions, and references. When
flipping through both articles, the SCIgen article follows the conventions of a
real scholarly article so well that it is impossible to tell the difference
unless you read the SCIgen article, and even then one might still believe its
information to be accurate. The fact is
that SCIgen uses the conventions of a scholarly article so closely that when
someone is reading this article, even a well-educated person could be
deceived.
The SCIgen generator is able to
create articles looking extremely similar to “The Influence of Strength
Training on Overhead Throwing Velocity of Elite Water Polo Players,” although
still leaving some crucial differences. When
reading the SCIgen article, very large words are used to create the allusion of
a very knowledgeable person writing the article. When taking a step back, and seeing the
article for what it is, it actually does not make very much sense. All the sentences in SCIgen are coherent and
make compete sense, just as they are in the real scholarly article.
The SCIgen generated article may
appear to be legitimate, but the real article “The Influence of Strength
Training on Overhead Throwing Velocity of Elite Water Polo Players,” has a few
important aspects that make it more consistent and accredited. One specific part of the article that allows
it to be credible is the experiments explained, and charts laying out all the
collected data. In the SCIgen charts,
there is no real explanation that is reasonable to what the chart is explained. On the contrary, inn the real article, arm
velocity was tested by studying body mass, arm girth, body fat, and other
variables in order to express the scientific reasoning behind the study. The article also had an important piece of
information that was thouroghly explained which were the administration of the
tests they ran and a picture of the testing environment. This was key to their argument and backed up
their facts by explaining the background of the experiment and helping to walk
the reader through step by step. This
approach was important because the SCIgen article used large words to make the
reader believe it all made sense, instead of making sure the reader does
understand and giving evidence to become credible.
Hi Sophie!
ReplyDeleteFirst of all I want to mention that I really like your choice of article. I played water polo in high school so I found this really interesting! I like how to quickly acknowledge that the SCIgen article is pretty much all BS. Also, that you also realize that it can easily be mistaken as a scholarly article because of the way it looks. I also like how you analyze the contents and format of both of them. Visually, they look the same but content wise they are completely different. I think you did a really good job writing this. You analyzed and proved your point and it sounded smooth. Good job!